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 my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^

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Tsumi
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PostSubject: my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^   my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^ EmptyWed Aug 27, 2008 12:28 am

The Spectator


I am a spectator
Of this game we call life,
An island of calm
Amidst chaos.

Once in a blue moon
A player will fall,
And I will take her to my island
To heal her soul and body.

I fill the gaps
Left by others
As I take the darkness away from her
And make it my own.

Her wounds healed,
I let her go.
She doesn’t look back;
They never do.

Bit by bit,
My heart grows darker.
Yet those that come in my presence
Can only find light.

I am the spectator,
One that watches from the shadows.
Remembered by none,
Always alone.

I am holding a knife;
It’s pointed at my heart.
12 inches of steel;
My key to freedom.

My nearly black heart,
Pierced by the cold metal,
Becomes completely black
For once and for all.

I take my last breath,
Wondering if anyone will remember
But none does
As I take darkness from this world... to oblivion.


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PostSubject: Re: my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^   my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^ EmptyWed Aug 27, 2008 12:36 am

O_O
Nice poem Tsu Chan
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PostSubject: Re: my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^   my new poem, it's called the spectator ^_^ EmptyWed Aug 27, 2008 10:17 pm

nicely done tsu

>_> thats all i can say cause i dont read poems cheers
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O.O uwah...its so sad, Mitsu.... Sad
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